
Have you found that the written word has deviated far from what you've been taught in school? What do you think your English teacher would say about some of the content that makes it onto the web today? Wonder no more, because today we are interviewing an English teacher, and also a great writer on Zujava, Linda Belocas.
Here's the Q&A answer session/interview:
From a school teacher’s perspective, what do you think are the most important things an online writer should be concerned about?
In this digital age, the written word is oftentimes the first communication, and therefore, the first impression one has of another. It is easy to get caught up in the therapeutic effects of online writing and publishing. While I am a proponent of writing/blogging as a form of conveying your thoughts, feelings and experiences, I have also witnessed some of the inherent dangers. I refer to this as the “Soapbox Syndrome”.
With the blossoming of the internet, online writers are keenly aware of the broad spectrum of a seemingly infinite captive audience. A paradigm shift in writing has taken place. This particular vein of writing used to be categorized as informational. Now, it has sometimes taken a turn towards passive-aggressive confrontation.
Be passionate; not preachy. Be wise; not wiseass. The writing voice you adopt is the one people will associate with you in real life. Be very cognizant of what tone you are conveying, versus what you are trying to convey. Although it is a tricky tightrope to walk, it can make the difference between respect and disrespect, repeat business and business lost, and humility and vanity. What you put into print online is accessible for eternity. It can also have effects which far outlast the publication itself. Be proud of, and aware of, who you are representing as a human author.
What are the most common grammar mistakes that you’ve seen?
As texting becomes a more embedded means of communication in our culture, its abbreviated language is also beginning to merge into common written language. While it may be acceptable to use in an e-mail to a friend, usage of such terms as “b4”, “c u later”, and “thx” to a work associate casts you in an unprofessional light. Using proper English in written documents is imperative.
Scroll through an hour’s worth of Facebook posts, and you are bound to bear witness to a plethora of common grammatical errors. The one that I see most often is the misuse of “your” for “you’re”, as in the incorrect proclamation, “Your right!”
The word I notice misspelled most frequently is “definitely”, as “definately”. It is a favorite word choice for the younger set, and also one that pops up misspelled just as often in term papers. The thesaurus is a beautiful thing! My first and foremost suggestion would be to find an alternative (and more interesting) synonym. If you must use the word “definitely”, please remember that “it” is important to spell “definitely” correctly.
Where would you suggest people head to as a resource for common English grammar questions?
My favorite online resource is http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/. The site’s smart and savvy language mascot, Grammar Girl, breaks down writing rules in layman’s terms. This is going to strike many as old school, but I am also suggesting another pair of human eyes proofread any document which you deem important enough to be read by anyone other than your best friend. It may take a few minutes out of your breakneck pace, but it may also save face in the long run.
What other passions do you have, and have any of those passions influenced your writing style?
A passion for history was ignited in me as a young girl, and still burns strong. I was a voracious reader, and that translated into an appreciation for the power of a well-worded story. That’s what history is; the retelling of a story from our past. Shakespeare, Hawthorne, Frost, Poe, and Emerson --- each commanded the English language in their own unique way. Their works have stood the test of time. That is what writing should be, and what I aspire my own style to be…timeless.
How have you learned to be persuasive with your writing, and how can writers on Zujava incorporate some of those same methods on their leaves?
My current profession is in the field of direct selling. That means that I provide a product directly to a consumer. Since this is different than having a retail storefront which a customer would visit, my business requires personal contact and service to my clientele. Online newsletters and e-mail specials are a critical segment of my job. In order for them to be effective, they must:
- contain attention-grabbing titles
- be written concisely
- address the needs and wants of the customer
- be broken down into an easy-to-read format
- contain pictures
These points translate quite easily over to a Zujava leaf. Would you be more likely to read an article entitled, “All About Black Bears”, or “Black Bears In Our Backyards”? The latter certainly piques more interest. Think about your reader audience when writing your leaf. Who is your target demographic for this particular topic? Tailor your information and style to them. Make the leaf appear simple to read and complete by chunking it out. Include (legally-acquired) photographs to accompany your leaf.
What feature would you like to see on Zujava?
Zujava is such a fantastic vehicle for publishing and sharing information, as well as acquiring new information. I have loved watching it evolve so much in such a short span of time. I look forward to whatever is around the corner in Zujava!
What are you writing about next?
As mentioned above, I have an affinity for history. I am also very proud of my roots here in Southeastern Massachusetts. Be on the lookout for a leaf outlining some neat “under the radar” places to visit in our area. No, they aren’t museums. However, they are great places to spend time and soak in some local history, in an out-of-the-ordinary way.
Be sure to stop by and leave comments on Linda's leaves below:
- Effective Direct Sales Party Presentation Guide
- How a Sales Pacing Partner Can Help You Cross the Finish Line
- Detoxify Your Direct Sales Self
- Choosing Your Path in Direct Sales
A little disclaimer: Linda is my sister, and I can attest to the fact that she's a great teacher. She sent back proofreading edits four times on this blog post, just as you'd expect from an English teacher. Thanks for the interview, Linda!

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Great tips and advice; especially related to grabbing the audience and your "writer's voice". I know for myself, I try to keep in mind audience, tone, grammar, and being concise, and for me, it helps seeing a list of tips to help reiterate that and forces me to make sure I've accomplished those before publishing. Thanks, Linda (and Bill)!
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Thanks, Lavoie. I've read your articles, and it is evident that you write very honestly, about things that strike a chord with you. Whether it's a cause like Glenna's Melanoma Fund, or recommendations for a cruise vacation, you present the information in an easy-to-read style, with those "grabbers" as subtitles. In your line of work, I am sure you are extremely cognizant of how to phrase things in an unambiguous, yet courteous manner. Thank you for posting.
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I might add that if anyone is having trouble finding their writing voice, just write in the same way that you speak. Remove words like "definitely," "absolutely," "totally," and proofread for all of the aforementioned common grammar mistakes Linda wrote about above.
Another common online writing meme I see in articles is the overuse of exclamation points to punctuate sentences, and overuse of buzzwords like "epic," "killer," and "awesomeness." They might be okay on occasion, but if they become part of your everyday writing, you may need to hit Thesaurus.com for some inspiration.
Thanks for all of these tips.
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Totally, absolutely, definitely awesome advice Linda! (do I get detention for saying that)
Seriously, you have given us some sound advice. I have seen some terrible use of the English language online. My grammar and spelling isn't perfect , I would never publish anything that wasn't proof read more than once.
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Thanks for the reply, Paz. Trust me; while English may be my thing, math computation isn't always on the money for me. I have to use a calculator to double, triple-check, have someone else check it for me, and so forth. It's just like proofreading and spellchecking for numbers!
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Good entry.
While I agree with the notion of VERY strict rules for publication, trying to extend those rules to facebook, forum entries, and emails is both an overreach and unproductive.
On the one hand, the rules want us to "write like we talk." On the other hand, the rules want us to use the talk substitutes - FB/email/forums - with an elegance that is never/seldom used in conversation.
The rules are perfect and should be abided. I support perfection, but it is not required in every venue. Nothing is a greater chiller of nice/ordinary folks trying to communicate their thoughts/feelings on a forum/FB than the appearance of the grammar police. Casual chats should be casual, w/o worrying about the rules. Conveying a thought and engaging is far more important than their vs. there, or your vs. you're in casual online chats.
Part of the joy/privilege of knowing the rules is being able to break them at will; casual written communication is a good/safe place to feel that joy and exercise that privilege.
DISCLAIMER: Published writing should be about perfect. Tho, to me, consistent and recognizable style, whether stilted or overly casual, is always more important than rules.
:-)
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Dear Jadeink,
You are evidently a prolific writer, who has a good handle on the English language and how to use it to write persuasively, and with your own voice. Bill did suggest in his comment to "write in your own voice". I would amend that with, "in blogs, posts, texts, persuasive essays, and casual chats." In everyday life, I text, e-mail, and chat with friends, using casual style, lingo, abbreviations, and colorful vernacular. I enjoy these forums. My friends can attest to that! It is not how I write in my work e-mails, letters to parents, or other official business. There is a place for this in our society. However, the lines are becoming blurred. Appropriate, correct, and more formal writing styles should be adhered to when writing something which would call for it, e.g. a term paper. I think we agree on this point.
As an English teacher, I have an automatic white-out/correct mental mechanism. It's how I'm wired. However, I have the restraint and courtesy to never correct that on FB. I make mistakes, too. I just try not to make them when they 'count', such as in a cover letter for a job application. You'd be surprised at how lax each subsequent generation is becoming in presenting themselves with care and pride, in black and white.
I hope that clarified the message in the interview.
To all readers:
Whatever means of online communication you choose, follow "The Golden Rule", and be nice. Isn't that what counts the most? It's all in the delivery!
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Linda, I enjoy reading what you write. It's like breathing in a breath of fresh air!
When I was in high school and college, I loved writing. It's been a while, and I feel like I'm getting rusty. This blog post reminded me of the good old days...
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To clarify, I also loved reading texts that were written well. That's why I enjoyed reading what you wrote above.
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Great tips from a good teacher. Thanks for this post. :)
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