Carlos Santana has something in common with Amy Winehouse. Both are often misunderstood and dismissed, which is unfortunate because both have made some amazing music.
I have put together a leaf which features my favorite Carlos Santana Music. I enjoyed putting this leaf together and I love the results. However, I would REALLY appreciate any suggestions about how to improve it, because I want this leaf to shine.
Thanks in advance for your feedback.
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It is a very nice leaf.
I did NOT proofread it, but the flow is good.
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Crossovers should always be sought when doing a comprehensive music story. You wanna attract "new folks to read about old folks."
The best grab for Santana crossovers remains Orianthi.
Within 10 years, she will be dubbed the best of the shredders. NOT the best "female" shredder; the best shredder --- period.
Santana has known the destiny of Ori for a very long time.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RLikdEWRHYk
At about 2:50 in the vid, Carlos notes that he will eventually retire and that his "first choice" to grab the baton is Ori.
There are lots of vids - find a high quality one - showing Ori playing with Carlos. Use one or two in the leaf.
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I would include a piece of that vid in your leaf and others that highlight Ori and Carlos together.
I would NOT go deeply into Ori's current gigs; other than, perhaps, a solo appearance schedule.
Place a module titled:
Who Will Grab The Santana Baton?
Inside that module, I would put lots of Ori keywords. [I would also add Ori tags to the leaf.]
A couple of Ori biography sentences will be enough.
The rest of the module should be vids that tie Carlos to Ori and the future of shredding.
You should briefly state your positive views about the vids that you use.
MANY experts - and all of Ori's fans - agree with Santana about who will "take over." Those fans will find your leaf, if your SEO is proper.
[You can use "deep links" to the Orianthi module to promote the leaf. Place those links on Ori pages and social media frequented by Ori fans.]
The Ori module should NOT debate the merits of Santana's view. Readers can state their views pro/con in a comments section, but I would NOT set up a debate.
I would also NOT name any other "contenders" for the succession.
If a debate develops, let it happen naturally; don't institute it.
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Excellent. You have your credits in place, your leaf is vibrant, and alive. You have created exactly the type of article that should be proudly displayed on Zujava. Great job.