Does this look OK?

Hiyas,

I've completed my first leaf at http://www.zujava.com/tips-for-going-on-a-bicycling-break-in-new-zealand

I guess I should add a video or something but apart from that, does it look OK?

PS. I love the look and feel of Zujava. I think it has great potential.

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I think you've done a great job on your first leaf.

Two things I miss, though, if you want to do some polishing. First of all, "about the author" is missing, something I always look for. I like to read about the writer and why they are on the topic. Second, if you added some of your own experiences, that would really add to the personality of the article.

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Hi Art,

Thanks very much for the feedback. I think I've added an "about the author" now in my profile. And I'll try to add more about my personal experiences.

Thanks again.

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Nicely done. Great tips to. If I wasn't afraid to fly, New Zealand would be on my bucket list.

One thing I suggest is that you put a Zujava banner at the end of the leaf (or somewhere on your leaf). You can find the banner link on your dashboard under the "referral" tab, which is next to the "my bio" tab. If someone joins via your banner link, you earn 25% of that users content. ...that changes to 20% after the first of the year. I usually add at least one Zujava banner to my leaves.